Radio Ad Edit: From this, to that :)

Here is my first radio advertisement: 

And after a lot of revision, here is the Final Draft of my Radio Advertisement!! Enjoy~

eannie’s Academy of Dance

Radio Ad: 30 sec

Produced: October 4, 2011

SFX: Batting Sound

Christine: Can you feel it?

SFX: Heart Beat

Christine: Your hearts racing.

SFX: Heart Beat

Christine: Are you ready for this?

MUSIC: Fast Paced Music Begins

[Start when music begins]

Christine: Join Jeannie's Academy of Dance. Don’t be a wall flower; have the hottest moves on the dance floor. Your first month is free, so what do you have to lose except for your old outdated dance

    moves? Jeannie’s Academy of Dance

Voice 2: Check us out on our Facebook page at www.facebook.com/jeanniesacademy